Who is Norae?
That is something I can think about all day
She has a very strong heart
Even though it has been torn apart
She has been through a lot of pain
But she knows she still has a lot to gain
Happiness is her main goal
But she can't seem to find it in her soul
Through hell and back she has been fighting
Her anger is building up and her flames are igniting
She is trying to hold it in
But now she is afraid that it might win
"It is not about how hard you can hit, it is about how hard you can get hit and keep moving"
That is something she will never stop doing
Although doing it is hard
She knows not to let down her guard
She knows not to let down her guard
Going through life, she is almost there
The past is something she can not repair
Constantly moving trying to avoid all the wrong
Going through all this I can tell you that Norae is strong
Norae all day I like that sounds coo
ReplyDeleteTell u that norea is strong
DeleteI love your rhyme scheme! Also how honest and open you are
ReplyDeleteThe rhyming flowed nicely.
ReplyDeleteVery nice your tone was perfect loved it
ReplyDeleteI love the tone of your poem it is has a lot of meaning and is very powerful.
ReplyDeleteVery nice rhyme scheme, I can tell you put a lot of effort and time into your poem.
ReplyDeleteI like how you started out asking a question, and how you talked in third person. I like the rhymes you used, they fit in perfectly with your personality and, well... you.
ReplyDeleteYour poem left me speechless. I don't know what else to say but I liked your quote
ReplyDeleteNorae you are strong , I love how you put your feelings into this and that you are sure that get through everything life brings you
ReplyDeleteI like how you said the past is something she can not repair.
ReplyDeleteI like how you tied your past and hopes for the future into the poem
ReplyDeleteFeels very meaningful and I can tell you put effort into this.
ReplyDeleteNorae I hope you can be happy after everything.
ReplyDeleteNorae,
ReplyDeleteWell done. I like how you incorporated a line we just saw in a video. Keep up the good work
Her anger is building up and her flames are igniting was a very smart word choice. I love it.
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