Friday, September 19, 2014

Paranoid

All day she had been paranoid.  Her mother still was not home from work at 7 like usual.  It was already a quarter to 9.  She tried calling her cell phone but it kept going to voicemail.  Then, when she called her job her co-workers said that she did not come in today.  She did not know if her mom's boyfriend was home. If he was she did not want to find out.  She did not like him, he had a very high temper.  Instead of talking to him, she decided to take a walk. They had the woods located in their backyard.  Her mom told her that if she is ever feeling down and worried to go back there and find her little rabbit.  She loved that rabbit but she was older now and did not want to throw it away.  So, she left it in the backyard.  But when she looked for him she could not find it. She was sure this is where she had left him.

3 comments:

  1. You should have noted that the rabbit was not alive.

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  2. Other than that, your writing was very good!

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  3. This was a good story all together but there were a couple minor mistakes. For example the way you worded it, the rabbit in the story sounds like it is living and not stuffed.

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